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I find this article confusing and difficult to follow. Would it be possible for someone with knowledge of this denomination to rewrite much of it so that someone with no knowledge of the church or of the restoration movement can make sense of it. For example, it would be great the opening sentence could describe the church briefly, for example "The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada is a relatively new Christian denomination in Canada with X number of churches and Y number of members. It is closely aligned with denomination Z and some of its distinctive and defining doctrines include ..." - I'm assuming that this church is considered a mainstream Christian denomination that recognizes other denominations rather than an exclusive sect that doesn't recognize other denominations - is this right? I also think some of the language needs to be made more neutral. --[[User:Graham grove|Graham]] 18:17, 13 May 2010 (UTC) | I find this article confusing and difficult to follow. Would it be possible for someone with knowledge of this denomination to rewrite much of it so that someone with no knowledge of the church or of the restoration movement can make sense of it. For example, it would be great the opening sentence could describe the church briefly, for example "The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada is a relatively new Christian denomination in Canada with X number of churches and Y number of members. It is closely aligned with denomination Z and some of its distinctive and defining doctrines include ..." - I'm assuming that this church is considered a mainstream Christian denomination that recognizes other denominations rather than an exclusive sect that doesn't recognize other denominations - is this right? I also think some of the language needs to be made more neutral. --[[User:Graham grove|Graham]] 18:17, 13 May 2010 (UTC) | ||
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| + | Hello Graham: | ||
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| + | I wanted to say this about The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada that it can be deleted if you can changed the name of '''The Canadian Evangelical Christian Church''' to '''The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada'''. The name was changed a year ago and I did not know what to do but come up with a page that describes the name in full. | ||
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| + | Is it possible to this change of name and delete the page I just described? | ||
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| + | I am sorry to cause so much confusion over the name change. | ||
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| + | Lavi123 | ||
Revision as of 01:52, 17 May 2010
I find this article confusing and difficult to follow. Would it be possible for someone with knowledge of this denomination to rewrite much of it so that someone with no knowledge of the church or of the restoration movement can make sense of it. For example, it would be great the opening sentence could describe the church briefly, for example "The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada is a relatively new Christian denomination in Canada with X number of churches and Y number of members. It is closely aligned with denomination Z and some of its distinctive and defining doctrines include ..." - I'm assuming that this church is considered a mainstream Christian denomination that recognizes other denominations rather than an exclusive sect that doesn't recognize other denominations - is this right? I also think some of the language needs to be made more neutral. --Graham 18:17, 13 May 2010 (UTC)
Hello Graham:
I wanted to say this about The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada that it can be deleted if you can changed the name of The Canadian Evangelical Christian Church to The Evangelical Christian Church in Canada. The name was changed a year ago and I did not know what to do but come up with a page that describes the name in full.
Is it possible to this change of name and delete the page I just described?
I am sorry to cause so much confusion over the name change.
Lavi123
